Tuesday, 20 November 2012

progress! - peer reviews



This is too show whats been going on with my cover, i finally found a mast head typography that i liked... its a bit more in your face which is whats needed for a title and i found a way to tie in music with the tape as it wasn't a very music related cover...

I made 'ophelia' even bigger because it wasn't standing out enough to me, but now i really love it!

the sub heading typography i changed because it was too swirly and fancy so i made it more stand out-ish and matched the colour to her jumper to make it tie in nicely.

I also added a banner onto the bottom to weigh it down a little as it didn't look very magazine-y but now  im so so so much happier.

i also made her a little larger as she is the subject of this magazine so deserves to be a little bigger!

Any opinions? :)
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3 comments:

  1. farnhamcoursework20 November 2012 at 02:59

    I really like your front cover, i think the red works well with both images which results in an elegant finish ;)

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  2. farnhamcoursework20 November 2012 at 03:01

    Maybe a bit more text down the left hand side, i think apar from that it's amazing!! :D

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  3. farnhamcoursework23 November 2012 at 04:18

    I think maybe you should make the mast head bigger and the tape a little smaller, otherwise great

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